Monday, June 13, 2011

Pretty - Magpie #69

Magpie Tales is a creative writing blog by Willow at Life at Willow Manor. Click on the link to see the other entries.

As I grow older, I become a concentrated version of myself gradually discarding all the extraneous bits from my environment. I slowly realize that I don't really need this or that thing and I let go of my attachment and welcome the simplicity of scarcity. Strange the little things I am still unable to release - useless object but so pretty.

Here is another take I feel the need to add:

Sensuous tip, smooth and glistening, hypnotic destination and, for a few timeless moments in a lifetime, the center of the universe.

10 comments:

  1. i love the way you wrote this. the scarcity of your words illustrates the very thing you're trying to express. fave line:

    "As I grow older, I become a concentrated version of myself "

    i think that's so true... and it's good to evaluate and cast things off, so the concentration isn't bitter ;)

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  2. Yes, the concentrated, pure versions of ourselves. I love that. Me, too.

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  3. Hummmm....I like this! Letting go and holding on...

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  4. Purging the unnecessaries is so liberating:) It is happening little by little for me too! Great take on this weeks prompt.

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  5. love it,

    being independent from attachment is a growth/wise move.

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  6. Agree, I think we start realising that the who and how we spend our time with that is important, the things that surround us are not vital.

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  7. I love the idea of being concentrated, but also the value of discarding. You get to a certain point in your life where those extras are not necessary...

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  8. It is such a freeing time...the letting go, yet holding on. Beautifully expressed.

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  9. "Strange the little things I am still unable to release - useless object but so pretty."
    I hope you feel good about the holding on to the beautiful things, their beauty is their usefulness!

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  10. Very insightful and very true. Material things become less important and we value what we have for free.

    Anna :o]

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